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    夜离

                        从天空泻下的黑
                   淹没了缓缓伸出的手
               颤抖着
                      一把凝重
               
                       离人的夜
               哽咽了谁的眼泪
                可那咸
                   却分明从心底溢出
                 无奈
              留不住南下的爱恋
     
                 一句再见
                 拉长了两千公里的距离
            一起       黏稠了时间
               强颜欢笑的心
                  挪呀
         向着明天升起的太阳
                     

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    果然有现代诗的风格,支离破碎阿
    Sept. 12
    June 30
    没有思想wrote:
    写的不错,忽悠的我一愣一愣的。是你自己写的吗?
    June 12

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